Saturday, March 31, 2007
Never know what are polar bears!
Most people don’t have the eco-awareness. Polar bears are endangering! People still consume any available rescores such as electrics, water, and paper. They think that these rescores are not expensive and value, so they use them excessively much. People go out without turning off lights, computer screens or other electrics equipments. Some institutes inform things by printing and sending flyer. Those are not necessary. When people can understand the importance of environment protecting?
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Hi. Some comments for you. Thanks for keeping up with the requirement for frequent posts, though I notice they are all from March, though this period includes February and April as well. . .
I'll rewrite this post to illustrate the sort of errors I'm finding in your writing. First I'll comment that you don't seem to make any clear connection between polar bears and the rest of your comments.
Now then:
Most people have no awareness of ecology. The polar bear is an endangered species! Nevertheless, people keep on consuming all the available resources [not "rescores!!"], such as electricity, water, and paper [is electricity really a resource?]. They thik that these resources are not expensive or valuable, so they use them excessively [or, "too much."]. For example, people leave the house without turning off their lights, computer screens, and other electronic devices. Some institutes give out information by printing and sending flyers. Those are unnecessary. When will people understand the importance of protecting the environment?
Please see my other comments too.
Score for this time: 75
Chris O'Brien
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